Wednesday, September 14, 2016

Moxie Nixx New Ghost Story

I'm working on a new ghost story called, "The Fourth Angel." Here is a little bit of the opening scene.



Midnight in Glengalough, not far from where the River Boyne flowed into Dundalk Bay on the East Coast of Ireland. Once a prosperous abbey, the abbey had died and the town had moved east to be closer to the river and the Irish Sea.
Young Hamlin O’Boyle should never have been there in that graveyard in the middle of the night. If the stories were true, if he had known the stories, he would never have gone there even in full daylight, but he wasn’t from Glengalough. He was from the Bog of Allen, three days ride west.
“Just follow the river, son,” said his father. “Here’s money for the ferry over the Blackwater. Just keep the River Boyne on your right, and you’ll come out okay in the end. Even a boy as simple as you can follow the river, can’t you?”
Of course. Certainly, Father. No, I’m not one bit frightened to ride to the sea alone, to see grandmother. It’s only three days and two night, alone, just me and the horse, in the wilds, by myself!
Like so many other things in life, it was simple; but it sure wasn’t easy. He had doubled back twice: once, when the road wandered too far from the river, and he was sure he had lost his way; and once again, when he had come to a fork and took the right fork, the lower fork, the fork that should certainly have wandered back to find the Boyne, but had instead taken him back up into the hills. He had lost hours of time. Now, he was running out of food and felt he was so perilously close to his destination that he dared not stop, even when darkness fell.
Frigga, his palomino mare, paused in the middle of the ancient graveyard. She pawed the overgrown tufts of grass, and shook her head at the tilted gravestones.
“Easy there, Frigga,” said Hamlin, his voice trembling.
Frigga snorted, and to the boy, it seemed that the chuffing meant, “Easy? Bah! You’ve gotten us lost in a graveyard, and you want me to take it easy?”
He patted her neck and looked over his shoulder. There must have been 30 gravestones in various stages of falling over. He saw a low wall that looked like a giant snake slithering through the darkness. His heart sang when he saw a small stone outbuilding, but even in the darkness, he could tell the roof had fallen in, and it was too small to be anyone’s home.
He looked up. “Oye! What is that?” 
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I think it's going to be a hoot. You'll soon be able to buy the story here

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